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  1. SuBee

    Old Friend

    It troubles me................ Nice one as always Jerry
  2. SuBee

    ROCK ON

    I enjoyed that story K8. I was a big church goer from 5 - 15....I was an evangelist..................no comments please!!!!!!!!!! My experience of church was very different to yours.................ah well a story or triolet for another day....................
  3. SuBee

    Excerpts From Colin Brough's Journal

    I'm in all of a turmoil now! :cry:
  4. SuBee

    TRIOLETS

    Post Back to Backs It was a lovely day out, we all had fun We must do it all again real soon Where did we go? the Back to Backs in Brum! It was a lovely day out, we all had fun Ken and Ted were there, and out came the Sun It was a truely splendid afternoon! It was a lovely day out, we all...
  5. SuBee

    ONE FOR THE GRANDKIDS

    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww - Lovely!
  6. SuBee

    TRIOLETS

    Back to Backs Back to backs here we come, meeting up with friends on the day Excitment is building, and I'm bringing my mum Back to backs here we come. Les is buying the drinks and we're all having rum, on those narrow steep stairs we will sway. Back to backs here we come, meeting up...
  7. SuBee

    Another 10 minute write

    I'm dreaming of chocolate mudcake now..........blow the men..............GIVE ME MUDCAKE!!!!!!!!!!!
  8. SuBee

    mixed up doll!!

    Lovely Rod - I feel a triolet coming on........................
  9. SuBee

    TRIOLETS

    Just for Les.................. When I put pen to paper and write a poem Which ends in that very word! If successful will I get a Jeroboam? When I put pen to paper and write a poem Not the sinful king Jeroboam But the four fifths of a gallon (of wine) is preferred When I put pen to paper...
  10. SuBee

    Another 10 minute write

    A woman after my own heart
  11. SuBee

    TRIOLETS

    I would try a song.............except whenever I sing, people ask me to stop. Both my sons play guitar...and one of them was going to see if he could put one of my earlier poems to music.....but as often is the case - I dont think he actually got round to it...
  12. SuBee

    TRIOLETS

    The art of poetry I dont think its talent K8 so much as structure. Writing poems like this, reminds me of writing an essay/assignment/report.........its just following a format. I suppose everyone finds their own way - and this structure assists me Infact, I think this is a way of...
  13. SuBee

    TRIOLETS

    The cost of war Is war really needed I often wonder Do we gain? Do we lose? What is the cost? More young lives to be torn asunder? Is war really needed I often wonder Count the minds that will buckle under the strain and torment, seeing good pals lost Is war really needed I often wonder...
  14. SuBee

    TRIOLETS

    You do something to me You do something to me, Somewhere deep inside. You make me feel so free. You do something to me. Its a love we cannot see, And its a love we cannot hide, You do something to me, Somewhere deep inside. I was just listening to Paul Wellers song - You do something...
  15. SuBee

    TRIOLETS

    TY dennis - I'm ready for my next challenge now
  16. SuBee

    TRIOLETS

    Many men know how to flatter Few men know how to praise Shallow worship doesnt really matter Many men know how to flatter Untrue words, can self esteem shatter Struck down with one hollow phrase Many men know how to flatter Few men know how to praise Not really from the heart - but...
  17. SuBee

    TRIOLETS

    Goodnight Grandad Its hard to explain to a child About death and the loss of a loved one Their hearts are so meek and mild Its hard to explain to a child Granddad died, as he slept, though he smiled His face relieved from the pain that had gone Its hard to explain to a child About death...
  18. SuBee

    TRIOLETS

    Rules Its rules that I crave for, They help me to write. Pen to paper, feel the words pour. Its rules that I crave for. I will try to limit, unless asked for more Trying my best, can't you feel my plight? Its rules that I crave for They help me to write Sue (work for me now!) K8 -...
  19. SuBee

    TRIOLETS

    Lost I feel so lost Since you left me alone To one side I was tossed I feel so lost I was counting the cost Feeling lonely at home I feel so lost Since you left me alone Have I done it? .......i will have a better attempt later when I have more time Sue (probationary trioleter)
  20. SuBee

    TRIOLETS

    I will - but this looks harder to me...............I gottta make it RHYME!! But - ya know me................I gotta have a go...........
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