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Shopwork Girl

Oisin

gone but not forgotten
Right! This is me very last shot at doin' romantic. If this ain't it, I give in - that's a promise...

SHOPWORK GIRL

Where are you now shopwork girl?
Are you with your knight?
Who took you off on his white steed?
And to a better life?
Does he make you happy?
And sometimes when you’re low
Is he always there for you
No matter what’s gone wrong?

Now as you stroll round your estate,
Counting out the roods,
With Spaniels yapping at your heels,
Dressed in your country clothes,
Do you think of way back when
The scene was swinging fast,
And ‘trannies’ tuned to Luxembourg,
Or Alan Freeman’s pops,
Set your feet a-tapping
To a Lennon and McCartney song?

You were pretty way back then,
Slim with long fair hair,
But wore your skirts a touch too long
Your shoes a little square.
You didn’t have an interest in
Keeping up with styles.
Having no one close to you,
You didn’t spare the time.

Lost in that void, you met a clown
(Do you remember how?)
Introduced by a mutual friend,
He offered you his hand.
With aspirations held in check,
You took his palm and smiled.
Not knowing what the future held,
You uttered some pat line.

Soon to that clown you became
More than just a whim.
He drew you from the shadows,
And let you lean on him.
He taught you how to laugh again,
Turned darkness into day.
In return he took your trust,
Each to each you gave.

But like a flower that blooms in spring
And dies when summer comes,
Youth is but the season,
And first love is the flower
So with your newfound self esteem
You grew in restlessness.
When time rang out the changes
The tide began to ebb.

So where are you shopwork girl?
Are you still with your knight?
Or did you draw him from your dreams?
A ruse to keep you out of reach.
Is your estate a lonely room
Your only jewel some old sad tune
And are the spaniels at your feet
Just memories and pride?
 
You know something Paul..?

I was going to PM everyone as a joke and ask them to post the words what a load of rubbish etc... :p
But I can't..once again, it's brilliant..
Well done.
 
work shop girls

Nice effort Paul perhaps you should raise your sights a bit and look upon all work shop girls as Cinderellas of the business world Its just a matter of reaching out to all of them with T.L.C. i,e Tender Loving Care :explode: Comprendi Amigo Areba Areba Senor the Senoritas are Beautiful ?
Paul dont give up your day job just yet .I know I know just look whos
talking
Chuckle Chuckle Hee Hee Hee :lol:
Paul see if you can find me in the rogues gallery ?
Reggie 8)
 
:D Well considering I was once a 'Shop Girl in Brum' in a past life . I will agree with Kandy and Di .‚.‘By god I think he.‚.’s got it.‚.’

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:)
 
Pom - why have you depicted Paul carrying a cushion and wearing lipstick? :evil:


Nice one Paul - I still read the undertones of lust a little :wink: - must be ya hormones
 
:D Em... er... :? What else could it have possibly been Paul :?: :?
We were talking about your male LIPS... I think :?


Chris :)
 
Good one Paul - it brought back my girlhood dreams of that knight of a white charger. Don't know about the spaniels though. I did have a spaniel cross once - would that count? Seriously I find your poem wistful and bitter sweet.
 
Co-op Carol

Hey Carol, are you still dreaming of Friday night..?
Will you listen to Cliff singing 'Travelling Light'?
All you need do is work two more days..
In this tired out old Store and the peoples' rude ways..
But Carol, oh Carol, with your hard laquered hair..
And plastered on make up and a skirt barely there
With your life counted down by the Shops opening bell
Just living for weekends..when these days count as well..
Ignoring the shoppers while filing your nails..
As the world passes by in your little Shop jail
And you complain of their rudeness as you daydream of Town,
While you're chewing your gum as they leave with a frown..
When they're buying the goods which then pays your wage..
So you can strut all your stuff on your Friday night stage
Carol my love..try to give out your smile..
With your limited dreams, you'll be here for a while..
And you'll no doubt have children and the circle will close..
And you'll think to yourself..what a sad life I've chose..

Not as good of course but based on Pauls 'Shopgirl'
But the really sad part?
I knew Carol well.....to this day she's played her part exactly to the
script.
 
Well if Les is gonna do romantic that's me sunk altogether - I can't be expected to compete with that so I'm bowing out.
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tsk..

Actually Paul..it's more a case of me trying to match YOUR work...you're a very talented man buddy..
 
:D I like both and Kandy my best friend when I worked in the shop was named Carol and you've got her to a 'T'. She would spend all day dreaming about our ' Van Driver ' and would rush out the back every time he came back from making a delivery. :lol:
Well done you two 8)

:)
 
There are still a few Carols around. Maybe if they did smile their day might be a bit brighter................ :roll:
 
You're both on the same wavelength there Kandor and Paul. Lovely writing. More please both of you...
 
Re: work shop girls

Reginald.F.Horton said:
... Paul dont give up your day job just yet .I know I know just look whos
talking
Chuckle Chuckle Hee Hee Hee :lol:
Paul see if you can find me in the rogues gallery ?
Reggie 8)

Reggie, I've been out of a day job over twenty years
I've been living on tripe ever since
Not the tripe I write but the tripe I eat
As I can't eat words
Cos they don't taste nice. :(

Thanks for the comment and, yeah. I saw you in the RG. :lol:
 
workshop girls

Hello Paul You seem to like Tripe have you ever tried Chicklings ? I think thats what they called them in the 30's ? yuck
So you saw me in the R.G. Paul what do you reckon that I look like an
old Fart they used to call me that when I worked at the Royal Mail in Brum
May I say Paul its nice to see my name mentioned so thank you for that It tends to make you feel like your one of the Barmen :lol:
Perhaps this may have been said to many a work shop girl Paul

You have a nose like a rose, a face like a ham
so come to my arms you bundle of charms
and stick to me closer than JAM

at least I think thats how it went :idea:
Cheers Paul
Reggie
 
Reggie baby

Did you know a small guy called Mick Hughes at all? (from the RM)
 
Oh please Reggie, don't be swayed by those rough persons known as BARmen. I thought Dennis was a man of principles, but he wouldn't be our mascot in BRA 'cos they got at him. You are obviously a gentleman of great sensitivity, who will only be ruined by those drunken louts. Keep the lovely poetry coming.

Chris, did Carol and the van driver ever get together? :wink: :wink:
 
Great stuff... O0
as an ex-shopwork girl myself (from Banks' Stockland Green to my uncle's fruit and veg shop on Witton Rd, and lots in between), it's important to recognise and appreciate what they feel like and go through.
 
Way back when I was a shop girl too Paul and I loved and still love that pome :)
 
Right Reggie Chicklings had them lots of times at home in Aston the 40s, Mom also used to get them when we moved I think she got them from Thompsons also Tripe & Onions and Pigs Trotters O0
 
I've just read it again..
I've said it before I'll say it once more..
My favourite poem on here..
 
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