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Fight for the right

K

Kate

Guest
To every dark corner of this earth
The warrior king vows to take his search
And force all who challenge to kneel
in obedience at his mighty throne.
For democracy’s supremacy he fights
Claiming all humankind his god-given right
But amid the righteousness and zeal
some demand - who did cast that first stone?


Maybe needs a bit of work, but a first draft. It was in my head and had to come out - you know how it is!
 
No Work Reqd

kate its Great as it is, to re-work? no not required because it came through your head but originated in your heart, The Truth of your feeling erupted in thought & bathed us in its glow,
grrrh Don,t touch it, Ok xx John :)
 
It's all good babe..

And to use the current saying in most U.S. prisons
'I'm down wid dat'
 
I like it just the way it is too, Kate. :)
One of these days I'm going to write something deep and meaningful instead of the usual tripe I pour out. All I've gotta do is re-invent meself first. ^-^
 
DEEP AND MEANINGFUL

One day the cat was sitting on the mat
and it seriously believed it saw a rat
That rat was only in it's head
Poor old cat was very nearly dead

:crazy2:

See what I mean? I will keep trying though folks O0
 
Re: Fight for the right of Kate,s Cat

Kates lovely old cat was delusional
Mind wandering angst ridden dimential
Rat tales now becoming occasional
Cream dreams purring so delectable
Sleep now old friend, night eternal
Your time with me,, unforgettable

John :)
 
KATE MY DEAR

STICK TO FIRST IMPRESSIONS. I HAVE REWORDED SOME OF MY THOUGHTS AND MADE A HASH OF THE WHOLE THING. MY WASTE PAPER BASKED IF FULL OF REJECTED REWORDED POEMS.

BOB H
 
Yes, Bob, I have that experience too - the more you try to improve them the worse they seem to get :)
 
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