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Compose A Poem........ from a nominated word

Chris, I really do like your poem - just re-read it. It must go into your album as one of your best :)
 
:D Thanx Kate :!: Angela read it to Carl and he asked me if he could take a copy to school to show his teacher and the class what he has been doing over the school holidays.
I thought what praise from a six year old 8)

Chris :)
 
As a babby I crawled upon my knees.
When I was a nipper I to sat on mom’s knees,
When I was a school kid she told me to wash my knees.
My future wife had me on bended knees.
Now I cut her toe nails on my knees.
I can still bend zee knees
It’s getting off them
I have trouble
with.
 
Re: I have to say...

Raindrops were falling from the sky ,
It was my fathers funeral ,
I was only a boy ,
I think i was trying not to cry,
But when your so small,
It isn`t easy,
But i tried to stand tall,
Even though i felt queasy.
 
raindrops fall against my car
good job i dont have to travel far
by the time ive done a few mile
the sun breaks through it brings on a smile

when i stop i dont look down
there's a big puddle i nearly drown
i ask a passerby is this gloucester
i said my name is dr foster
 
As a babby I crawled upon my knees.
When I was a nipper I to sat on mom*‚*’s knees,
When I was a school kid she told me to wash my knees.
My future wife had me on bended knees.
Now I cut her toe nails on my knees.
I can still bend zee knees
It*‚*’s getting off them
I have trouble
with.

Brilliant!
Do you belong to a writers' group? Does anyone?
Nico
 
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