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Remember the time

David Weaver

gone but not forgotten
‘Remember the time’
David Weaver ©
It must be sixty years or more,
since carving your name on the tree.
There’s no doubting you were lovely,
all that smiling meant for me.
Remember walking along that path,
when I carved the name of my lover.
With a heart, an arrow and a message,
promises of love for each other.
Whenever I return from far away,
I stroll to revisit the past.
To see how time has treated the pledge,
just two years ago the last.
Years that have softened the carvings,
Mother Nature healing the cut.
Over that time they’ve grown fainter,
healthy scars closing it shut.
It doesn’t take much to make memories,
the one’s that matter the most.
The laughing, the loving, the caring,
all those times holding you close.
Now in old age let’s remember the time,
when the power of our hearts was strong.
In the days when things were different,
the time we could do no wrong.
Think back on those scenes many years ago,
when I carved your name in the bark.
A girl, a boy, and a penknife,
on our tree in Sutton Park .

 
David that is so lovely thank you for sharing it with us.:)
 
hi david
that was really appreciated i really enjoyed that
it made me think back many years ago
when i done that sort of thing on a tree at the edgbaston ressovoir one hot summer day lazing with a cerain girl from brookfield being romanyic as i was in those days
well written dave
best wishes and seans greeting to you
astonian ;;;
 
hi david
very well written
j really enjoyed that it made my memories come flooding
back from when i was courting a lovely girl from brook fields
and when we strolled around the edgbaston resser
hand in hand on a hot summers day
i carved our names on a tree i surpose the bark as regrown over it
i surpose she his married now and old likr the rest of us
do you ladies ever think about the old boys you went out with in your younger days when you was in your teenage days and youth
seasons greeting to you all astonian ;;;;;
 
Thank you for your time in reading my work, I'm sorting out my short stories and poetry before I take off on my last great adventure. May your heads be wise, may your mouths be full, may your hearts be happy. David Weaver, Australia, son of a coalman in Aston who spent many hours in an Anderson Shelter, with his family.


‘Feeding the Swans’
David Weaver (C)
They reckon she's ninety years or more,
all scrawny and dressed in black.
Sitting forlornly on a bench near the lake,
bitter lips trembling and slack.

She's staring down into shaking hands,
at a photo of a youthful face.
A young soldier smiling up at her
tells of their secret place.

Memories of passion in the woodlands,
gentle walks through the valley of love.
Feeding the swans at the lakeside,
wild eagles soaring above.

There is no mark on his forehead,
of the bullet that ended it all.
Just the smile of a man for his lover,
as he waits for her teardrops to fall.

Ten million have covered his photo,
teardrops that won't go away.
For she will never forget him,
even though there is no more to say

The old spinster stands and shuffles away,
soon she'll depart this place.
To feed the swans on the lake once again,
with her soldier somewhere in space.

End

 
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